HSC Legal Studies

Writing the HSC Legal Studies Crime extended response

One 15-mark question on Crime, about 600 words. Most questions ask how effective the law is, so the top answers reach a judgement and support it with law, not just a description of the process.

Marks15, one question
LengthAbout 600 words
TopicCrime, the core
Key wordsAssess, evaluate, discuss, analyse

A plan for 15 marks

  • An introduction that answers the question in one sentence: how effective, and for whom.
  • Two or three body paragraphs, each on one stage, issue or response: what it is, the law or case you studied that shows it working, and its strengths and limits.
  • A conclusion that weighs the paragraphs and says what decides your judgement.

Balance the interests

Criminal law balances the rights of victims, offenders and the community. Say whose interests a response serves, whose it may not, and use that tension to explain your judgement rather than simply listing what the law says.

Try 2 questions

Question 1
In the adversary system, what is the main role of the judge during a criminal trial?
Question 2
In a hypothetical NSW case, a nine-year-old deliberately smashes a neighbour's window. Can the child be found guilty of an offence?

Next step

Questions people ask

How many examples do I need?

Enough to support each paragraph with law you have studied in class: a statute, a case, a law reform report or a media report. Each one should back a point you explain.

Do I need a conclusion?

Yes. A short one that states your judgement and the reason that decides it.